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    dots Submission Name: She Drivesdots
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    Author: nodrelsnef
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 22/32/29
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Prayer to the Mother of Jesus


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    She Drives

    She never comes, she never
    Leaves. She never dies,
    She never breathes. She
    Lifts me up. She tears me
    Down. She roars like thunder
    Without a sound. She calls
    Me up, she tells me “No.”
    Draws the map of where
    I’ll go. Run so far
    My legs won’t move. Words
    Of faith have yet to soothe.
    She follows now, she
    Followed then. She goes
    Away, returns again. Had
    Her once, all was mine. Drowned
    Her out, smoke and wine. Now
    It’s back. My heart, it grieves.
    She never comes,
    She never leaves.

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    ||| Comments |||
      this flow was so tight! i was like rapping this as i read it. it's really good. i'm definitely putting this on my fave list.
    some of my favorite lines were:

    She
    Lifts me up. She tears me
    Down. She roars like thunder
    Without a sound.

    She never comes,
    She never leaves.

    i agree. even though we stray. He's always there for us. they're never too busy and they never just desert us
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]



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