i agree with xsweetanglekiss. the emotion in this is very well hidden. it seems like u are just recording thoughts and memories in a catalog or something. but if u look close u can see the love u have for this person while u are writing and u can also feel the pain that he caused. damn good write
I really enjoyed reading this and it struck a chord with me as i've been blanked again and again and it hurts. you put a lot of emotion into this and that came across. great piece i like it a lot John x
This is one of those poems where it has so much emotion behind it, yet it is so suttle when you read it. It has alot of power, and it takes alot to be able to write a piece that stands out in that way! I admire your writing and I wish you to keep it going!