Description: I am just scared right now...when there is peace in the middle east I believe that the world is beginning to end...and I think that Bush is the anti-christ, but I am scared...Russians have nucs.The whole world is going to hell.
To The End -------------------------------------------
I wish I could paint
forever
and love you
for the rest of my life
and I'm scared
that this world is ending
and you won't follow me home
please
just believe
reach to me
and love me
and follow me
when I paint
I paint you
when I cry
my tears are only falling for you
I am worried about your soul
because I love you
because I think that the time we have left is prescious
and I think that if you don't open your eyes
we won't be together in the end
and I just love you so much
I never want to let you go
To go along with the last comment...it also spells out F-E-A-R. I can feel love, happiness, and fear when I read this. It makes me cry because I an picture you crying and reading this and it hurts. But this was actually beautiful as well...not just sad. It shows love and compassion.
This about made me cry and I'm in computer class so that wouldn't have been that great! lol. I have the same feelings Jaz. I totally feel this poem. This truly spells out L-O-V-E. Great write you sexy beast!
love is like manic depression - that's what i got from your poem. i liked the way you sorta moved me along from here and there. it was like little waves gentle but very scary because of the height of them. makes sense?
but do you really think that bush is the anti-christ the russians have always had nukes and they are no threat to us. as for the middle east....well we all have mixed emotions on that.
bush is the anti-christ that made me laugh yo if he had a swollen eye like a grape id think he was the anti-christ to
nice poem
their isnt much time get ready for the end of the world time is very precies a lot of people dont realize that the end of the world is soo close im riting a hole series of poems about it too
This was avery deep poem full of emotion. Truely wonderful I love how yoru trying to each out to this person and show him/her that you truely deeply love them and would do anything to hold on to that. I love this poem, very beautiful.
Very pretty. I think you're nuts. The Russians have always had nukes, nothing has changed with that, I don't bother keeping up to date with things like wars and such, so if the end comes, it will be a lovely surprise for me. I hope you read my poem, "You're Beautiful." Cause I think it might be a little different than what you expected from the title.
Submission Name: To The End
