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    dots Submission Name: To The Enddots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       I am just scared right now...when there is peace in the middle east I believe that the world is beginning to end...and I think that Bush is the anti-christ, but I am scared...Russians have nucs.The whole world is going to hell.


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    dotsTo The Enddots
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    I wish I could paint
    forever
    and love you
    for the rest of my life
    and I'm scared
    that this world is ending
    and you won't follow me home
    please
    just believe
    reach to me
    and love me
    and follow me
    when I paint
    I paint you
    when I cry
    my tears are only falling for you
    I am worried about your soul
    because I love you
    because I think that the time we have left is prescious
    and I think that if you don't open your eyes
    we won't be together in the end
    and I just love you so much
    I never want to let you go




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      To go along with the last comment...it also spells out F-E-A-R. I can feel love, happiness, and fear when I read this. It makes me cry because I an picture you crying and reading this and it hurts. But this was actually beautiful as well...not just sad. It shows love and compassion.
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by bleeding-soul | [ Reply to This ]
      This about made me cry and I'm in computer class so that wouldn't have been that great! lol. I have the same feelings Jaz. I totally feel this poem. This truly spells out L-O-V-E. Great write you sexy beast!
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by bleeding-soul | [ Reply to This ]
      love is like manic depression - that's what i got from your poem. i liked the way you sorta moved me along from here and there. it was like little waves gentle but very scary because of the height of them. makes sense?
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
      Intresting

    Your message in this is clear
    you do seem scared

    but do you really think that bush is the anti-christ
    the russians have always had nukes and they are no threat to us.
    as for the middle east....well we all have mixed emotions on that.

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      bush is the anti-christ
    that made me laugh
    yo if he had a swollen eye like a grape id think he was the anti-christ to

    nice poem

    their isnt much time
    get ready for the end of the world
    time is very precies
    a lot of people dont realize that
    the end of the world is soo close
    im riting a hole series of poems about it too

    memento mori
    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      This was avery deep poem full of emotion. Truely wonderful I love how yoru trying to each out to this person and show him/her that you truely deeply love them and would do anything to hold on to that. I love this poem, very beautiful.
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem gave me the chills and was really great.This poem was so beautiful I don't know what to say about it...other than it was great.

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    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by ArtichokeMosher | [ Reply to This ]
      Very pretty. I think you're nuts. The Russians have always had nukes, nothing has changed with that, I don't bother keeping up to date with things like wars and such, so if the end comes, it will be a lovely surprise for me. I hope you read my poem, "You're Beautiful." Cause I think it might be a little different than what you expected from the title.
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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