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    dots Submission Name: Silly Shower Songdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    Description:
       Ok - you have to just be like a kid & sing to whatever tune comes to mind - no rhyme and no reason just because!

    I've got my pink princess tennies on with bows for laces and my Oakland Raiders beanie on - and a smile so wide you just got caught inside!

    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share ES!
    tif


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    dotsSilly Shower Songdots
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    SMILE @ the World
    & the World will SMILE with U

    Laugh @ the World
    & the World will Laugh right back

    Sing @ the World
    & the World becomes a choir
    Life "IT's" Song

    Dance on the World
    & the World will Waltz with U

    Dream out of the World
    & the World becomes infinite




    Submitted on 2006-02-01 12:38:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah! This is a delightful poem! I haven't read your others yet, but I think you probably make it look easy that takes a fine skill to do. What the world becomes when we sing and laugh: you peg out a few examples and then for the ending, wham, the artist tells us what it's like way beyond, where things create themselves, one just needs to be there by dreaming .... I love this lighthearted poem because those thoughts can sound so heavy in prose, but heavy won't get us there will it ??
    | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem makes me feel so happy inside! I sing all the time in the shower! I've caught myself singing bits of different songs while I'm in the shower. Most recently:

    "Twist and Shout" by the Beatles
    a few verses from "The Necromancer" by RUSH
    "At the Hop" by some fifties band
    "Boom Boom" by the Animals
    Etcetera etcetera, lots of others,
    Even a few songs that I just made up or some poems that I wrote that I made into songs.

    The shower is the place I can sing with confidence. I believe that I actually sound good when I am in the shower.

    Sing with me world! Rock and roll hoochie koo! Lawdy mama light my fuse! If I had a hammer then I would hammer all over this land. You're knocking me out right off of my feet! She's buying a stairway to heaven! When the miller told his tale, he face at first just ghostly, turned a whiter shade of pale! Eight miles high and when you touch down...

    ROCK AND ROLL IN THE SHOWER BABY YEAH YEAH I LOVE IT ALL
    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      You know Tif, infinity is also inside of you. When you turn from the earthly plane and seek within your spirit becomes free as it truly is. I like your song and it's simplicity and complexity all wrapped together. Thanks for a fun read! Dan
    | Posted on 2006-02-07 00:00:00 | by dmm | [ Reply to This ]
      Hee hee! First of all, I love the description! That alone put a smile on my face! You and your pink princess tennies hahaha how cute!Next, this is a lovely little shower song! The one word I think of when I read this is perception. Everything lies in perception and how one views things. If you look to the brighter side, the world is kind and life is good. If you fall victim to pessimism then nothing ever seems to go right. Is the glass half full or half empty? I think it is easier to fall victim to pessimism but most certainly the optimistic views are much more worth the fight to keep them. A lovely little tune here. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-02-07 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Just the boost I was looking for today Tiff! What a happy and care free song. I bet if we all sing that we will light up the world with our smiles as you have in your hometown. this was so cute because it was silly. Great write!

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Sound advice here for everyone. The world is not all doom and gloom. There is joy to be had - if you know where to look.

    GK.
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Perfectly said
    In this write you said exactly the truth
    Look at every situation and you will always find a positive
    This is the trueest words of all
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-02 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      You are right... this is "a smile so wide I just got caught inside"
    I love that and I enjoyed this tonic of a tune. Great way to start the morning on a high note.
    Smile, laugh, sing, dance, dream..
    By golly, I think I will.
    | Posted on 2006-02-02 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I will always welcome the chance to be a kid again. I don't forget it most days, and we all deserve to do so.

    So thanks for a song that makes me remember, not to take life so seriously, after all the wee tiny one we are!

    love,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2006-02-02 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. i bet u had so much fun singing this nonsense (i meant that in a good way). this was really silly. i know that i sing in the shower all the time and i'm glad to see that i'm not the only one
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you Tiff I really needed this

    It's nice to still see that people are happy in this world.
    So I will sit here in my little dark corner and have this little smile that I needed on my face.

    Again thank you

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. its fun. i like fun. i really like "IT". so kepp writing. and keep being fun. we all need a little laughter in our life. if you really think about it it gets deep like

    "Dream out of the World
    & the World becomes infinite"

    its a good thing to think about like we can really go farther if we wanted to or something.
    love tina
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice little ditty. For me it brings to life the idea that things are only as good or bad as you make them. This little song, of course, is on the good side of things. I really enjoyed it. You brightened my day... thanks
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by chrls | [ Reply to This ]
      thanx for the comment and the hi your post was so true almost like be who you wanna be and be happy
    your question why rampage all of these will be in a book titled Poet's Rampage will be published early spring 2007 each day i write another chapter i have 5 publishers to choose from now
    they are waiting for me to send it
    hope all is good
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this sweet ans short song. I agree with this, especially if your having a wonderful day. This song puta smile on my face. It reminded me that were not really alone in this world.
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      i would read that in the shwor! are u kiddin that was great a little hard to read but it cheered me up...im very depressed now...
    well it was cool maybe u should add a part about a ruber duck...i mean i totaly didnt get it sorry but it was cool =-)

    trevor../../
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]


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