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    Author: submarine
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 128/91/45
    Words: 97
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    Unspoken words,
    Between us,
    Still i know,
    Just how much you hurt.
    I cant erase your pain,
    Or take away the guilt,
    All i can say,
    Is your not alone.
    I'll be there,
    To wipe your tears,
    To hold you in my arms,
    And share your fears.
    You may never tell,
    But i know, when you need me,
    Its that look in your eyes,
    I can read so clearly.
    You dont have to speak,
    Or even utter a word,
    I understand you,
    Like you understand me,
    Everything so clear,
    Even though,
    Its all unspoken.





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    ||| Comments |||
      That's so pretty.
    It made me say "aww" a couple times, although it did make me kind of sad (as sweet, happy things usually do.)
    I really like the way you worded this.
    You're very talented.
    I love it.
    Beautifully done

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]


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