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    dots Submission Name: China Dolls Ch.2dots
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    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
    Total Views: 726
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 217



    Description:
       Hey,

    This is chapter 2, to my story I started a while ago. It still needs a lot of work, and Im not finished writting the chapter yet. Here goes.

    *Let it Flow*
    Raven
    P.s. Any ideas on what to do next, I hit a mind block yet again.


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    dotsChina Dolls Ch.2dots
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    The rest of the day went smoothly, if you can call it that. I drove my sister to school; she was still being tortured in the inside. I knew the feeling well, a feeling of being soiled, untouchable, and betrayed...




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