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Poetic Princess

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 80
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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okay this was something so radom i don't even know where the hell it came from. I just heard a beat and came up with it so tell me what you think.

Poetic Princess

I can hear my heart beat
it's getting faster
while everyone's telling the crowd
i'm the lyrical master
my thoughts explode
too much pressure for me
then i come back
just to make those niggas see
i had heart in the game
i'll neva let it go
i'm coming back one day
just to let you know
so hold the crown
and they did but now it's a fact
that me the poetic princess
has come to take it back.....

Submitted on 2006-02-01 15:16:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was cool. why is it so short? lyrical master eh? that's believeable. this sounds a lot like a freestyle. i haven't posted any of my freestyles on here although i do it a lot. they're pretty ridiculous.
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by young p | [ Reply to This ]
  a lil freestyle to please the crowd eh? yeah it was bumping. it was kinda emotionless but a lot of freestyles are like that.

and they did but now it's a fact
that me the poetic princess
has come to take it back...

i like my crown though. can i keep it? please? i've really gotten used to holding it for u. i even keep it polished and everything
| Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked this it speaks volumes of the feelings you have for some and the thoughts you leave them with
great write and enjoyable read
| Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

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