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    dots Submission Name: If Their Ever Wasdots

    Author: KimmyBoo
    ASL Info:    1990/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.79 - 14/10/9
    Words: 345
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       uhh...thoughts and feelings...lots of my poems are about the same things..so yeah so is this

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    dotsIf Their Ever Wasdots

    If Their Ever Was

    If their ever was one,
    Whom I do so love,
    Thus would I say,
    It would be you.

    You once were the light of my night,
    You once brought pleasant dreams,
    Your eyes used to burn within me so,
    Your voice used to calm my soul.

    But now, I miss thee so,
    I took you for granted just a lil,
    Did not think of what it would be like now,
    Threw I did know this day was coming.

    I long just to see your eyes,
    That melt me away,
    To hear you laughter,
    That sweeps me to my feet.

    Dreaming of you, is no longer dreamy,
    They become haunting nightmares,
    Its not that they are not so nice,
    They bring peace till I awake the dawn,
    But to know..It was only a dream,
    Makes the sun seem black.

    My world is falling down around me,
    And its all my fault,
    For I loved you.

    You are gone,
    Maybe that's good,
    For now, you don't have to see-
    the deadness that leaks from these eyes.

    I saw the sadness in yours,
    But why are you so sad?
    I know my reason, but explain me yours.

    Did you miss me?
    Is that why your so,
    But if that's it,
    Then why did you not spend time.

    Or is it, time would not allow,
    For time you held,
    You controlled time,
    And I run with it.

    You were organized,
    So could you not fit me in?
    I guess not.

    And if you do miss me,
    Please let me know,
    Isn't it obvious,
    That I miss you?

    Of course it is,
    These poems I write,
    You read one,
    So you know.

    That if their was one,
    That I loved so,
    And thus would say my book:

    Eyes that once let love shine,
    Now sadness shows,
    What reason for thee,
    I'll smile and let you know,
    That it is this one,
    That I so do love,
    Yes..It is you.....

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      I still roll my eyes at this poem. That one boy was not the "boy of my dreams"

    This is lovely in a different way, it's a time capsule. But the poem sucks.
    | Posted on 2012-09-08 00:00:00 | by KimmyBoo | [ Reply to This ]
      I confirm a year later, five years after this was written.

    This peom: IS RETARDED.

    haha..geez..its soo cheezy. lmao. Its funny how things when your 15, seemed so big and important. Like boys, not men. lol. And the things that are important now, enough money to pay the doctors off, and rent and car insurance, and carpayment, and credit card, and utilies, oh and let us not forget our cell phones. And then you must have enough money for gas, and hope that you have 5 bucks to get you some food, TODAY. oh, the simplicity you felt. Now we know how are parents felt. haha..i elaborated a little too much.
    | Posted on 2010-06-23 00:00:00 | by KimmyBoo | [ Reply to This ]
      i think my poem is retarded..
    | Posted on 2009-05-29 00:00:00 | by KimmyBoo | [ Reply to This ]

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