they were right,it really hits home,and if it is ok with you im gonna copy this for one of my friends becuse this is exactly what i have been trying to tell her for the last 3 months that she has been in mourning for her parents.Bty,i teared up too,and i really,REALLY like this poem,in fact,i think the only one of youres that i like better is She Seems. Texan_Poet
wow, it's so simple... but totally have that stabbing feeling in my heart... where u know that tears are building up, it's so sweet, the words it'll be ok, they're so loving and comforting, like when u feel like your world is ending... when some one you love says it'll be ok... everything seems to get better instantly coz u know that they are there for u and that they love u nomatter what. this poem is magical. it's a really good write, don't be so quick to put it down, theres alot of feeling in it and i like it alot.
i don't think ive read any of your other writes before but i might have to start.