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    dots Submission Name: White earthdots
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    Author: Universal
    ASL Info:    17/f/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 46/48/35
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhite earthdots
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    I am the world
    Pressed tightly to the celestial bosom
    Swinging in content, cradled in the infinite




    Submitted on 2006-02-02 23:56:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very very nice...
    such creativity...I picture the poem from space...the world pulled my invisible strings into orbit..harbouring all life...
    no...let me know if i missed the mark..as sometime si often go on my own tangents in poems and get away from what the writer is actually saying...
    loved it anyway..
    Swanne
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]
      i dont kno if its me or what u wrote but i dont really get it..But Im More than Sure its Me..I Like the Words and everything..all in all its Me..Dont me No mind.im not the sharpest Pencil in the box yah kno
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by Yella_Bone05 | [ Reply to This ]


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