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    dots Submission Name: THE LAST MESSAGEdots
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    Author: Yella_Bone05
    ASL Info:    18/Grown Ass Woman/Kansas
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 65/90/32
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 207
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1079



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    dotsTHE LAST MESSAGEdots
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    The Life I Live Will Never Be the Same
    Each Day shes Gone Drives me Way past insane
    Just Knowing that shes No Where Near
    Brakes me down to Loyal tears

    My Wonder Woman is No Longer Here
    and its All Your Fault!
    but who am i to judge
    I was No where to be found
    when she was crying for love
    and Searching for help
    making me just as selfish as everyone else

    Wait!
    I refuse to take the Blame
    For My Families Faulty Mistakes
    Which CAN NOT and Will NOT EVER BE ERASED!
    Though She Played Both Parts
    and raised You to be Both Men and Women

    All she wanted was for you
    to Return the Love that was Given
    but You Couldnt Do that
    You Chose Yourselves over
    the Very Same Woman Who Gave you Life

    Making You All Shitty Ass People
    Which was something i already Knew
    and Since Shes Gone I Have No Need For any Of You
    My Hands are Washed
    So to Hell With You All
    Im thru




    Submitted on 2006-02-03 01:01:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I enjoyed this but the flow was kind of interrupted for me due to the use of capitals for nearly all of the words - I dont know why... This was a powerful piece & has great potential.

    Thanks
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ]



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