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    dots Submission Name: Rest In Heavandots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 152
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1262



    Description:
       To all the friends I have lost.


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    dotsRest In Heavandots
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    All the friends that have left,
    Are all the friends you wish you could have kept.
    Now we lay them down to rest,
    We know in life they tried their best.

    Now we only hope they could fly away,
    As we think about them every moment every second of the day.
    We know their gone but we didnt want them to go,
    For we love them dearly more than they would ever know.

    We remember them in memories of our past,
    Forever we want these memoris to last.
    Forever in our heart and mind,
    As you are taken by the world of unkind.

    Remember all the times we've had together,
    Even though you're gone we'll be friends forever.
    You are the angel of my day and the stars of my night ,
    Leaving me nothing but hapiness love and eternal light.

    I'm glad you tried to fight,
    In that you did what was right.
    You fought as hard as you possibly could,
    And if you had a choice to stay I know you would.

    Thank you for loving me,
    Enouraging me to be what I want to be,
    For sticking by my side through thick and thin,
    But even though you're gone you are still my angel within.




    Submitted on 2006-02-03 15:12:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this was really, really good. I could feel the emotion and the pain...very well written.

    But even though you're gone you ae still my angel within.

    By the way, awesome last line. (but ae should be 'are'...:) Just trying to help.
    But i love it...it just sends shivers down my spine.
    Oh, and did I mention this is going into my favorites?

    *darkwinged*
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by darkwinged | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this as it has made me sit and look back over 40 years at all the people i have passsed by as well
    mind you i still no my best friend and take time with them

    well done and a great thought to write about

    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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