A couple of days ago I started to search for my old poetry book, so I can make a newer updated one. Here is some poems from the old one. "You Said.." I wrote after my grandpa died.
*Let it Flow*
Raven
A Feeling & You Said... -------------------------------------------
A Feeling
The empty feeling within your soul
The waves crashing against the rocks
The cool breeze surronding your soul
The feeling of darkness closing in
They are all but a feeling
Too complicated to feel or explain
That would mean the world to be without
An unanswered wish
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You Said...
You said you would always be there
I'm tired of being lonely
You said you would always lend a sholder
I'm tired of crying
You said you would always belive
I'm tired of waiting
Know that your gone
Knowing you wont come back
Leads my heart and soul
To a place unsought
Pretty good poem. The last stanza didn't really work with it. More specifically, the last line. It doesn't fit. But its good imagery, and definitely very emotional. The first part was really good.
Submission Name: A Feeling & You Said...
