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    dots Submission Name: Nameless Angeldots
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    Author: Skinwalker
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 36/57/28
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       A poem upon Death the person


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    dotsNameless Angeldots
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    knee deep in the blood of man,
    a sillohette of something stands.
    he carries the carrion by mouth or by hand,
    he can look anyway and lives in no land.
    always found near bloodshed
    he carries away all the dead.

    he comes on wings
    to carry all things
    old, bad, tall, nice, short, new,
    one day he'll come and take you.
    to a crossing of time itself
    to future, heaven or hell.

    his eyes are hollow, showing no care,
    he has feathers, skull, or beautiful hair,
    he is the raven, the corpse, or a man on wings of an ash grey tone.
    he is the taker of souls, the end of life, he is the carer of all and none.
    you may call him Death, if you're afraid of hell,
    but truth is, he's the only Nameless Angel.




    Submitted on 2004-04-29 19:27:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aww ({) dat's so sweet. I know I've been giving a lot of positive comments to people but this is just awesome. I doubt anybody could give a negative comment to this. Keep it up and revise them a bit more and you'll get right up there...I think you will anyway.
    | Posted on 2004-05-15 00:00:00 | by sadistchild | [ Reply to This ]


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