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    dots Submission Name: The Stormdots
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    Author: WindEmpress
    ASL Info:    15/f/meditating
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 95/124/44
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 224
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 387



    Description:
       I love thunderstorms and I'm missing them due to winter...


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    dotsThe Stormdots
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    A darkend sky full of mystic and wonder
    Making a simple rythem on the roof
    Tip-tap-tip-tap
    And out upon the sky
    A flash of dazzling light
    Streaks across the sky
    And a voice splits the heavens
    Rolling across the land
    The song of life
    Giving and demanding on its own
    Come with me to listen...
    to the thunder roll




    Submitted on 2006-02-03 18:56:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nothing like a good old fashioned thunderstorm to blow away the cobwebs.

    Your description of one of Mother Nature's wonders was very good.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Not bad. It's not some emotional teenage poem, about anger and depression and hatred, but about a simple thunderstorm and the beauty of it all.

    Nicely done.
    *darkwinged*
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by darkwinged | [ Reply to This ]



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