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    dots Submission Name: Arsenic Timmydots
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    Author: nolram
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 41/46/19
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       This was indirectly inspired by a girl. It's about hangups with life.


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    dotsArsenic Timmydots
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    With a default emotion of claustrophobia in wide open spaces
    Timmy was at a loss as to how to survive in this horrifying place
    Normally calm
    the slightest threat now perturbed deeply Timmy's head
    Perpetually falling out of grace
    dissociation was the only state Timmy could lie relaxed in bed
    "I want to leave" he screamed at the top of his lungs
    but fear of death held him back
    and he continued on as if he hadn't had enough
    Scared, scarred and terrified
    he layed on his back in the dust
    Afraid of choking he turned onto his stomach
    and into his nose arose a menacing must
    The urge of "must flee" combined with the literal smell of something musty
    filled the dank room
    which was strange since he was outside on a mountaintop
    A pandora's box opened up torturing poor Timmy with all his neurotic fears.
    Absolute claustrophobia on a mountain top the walls seemed to be caving in
    In the middle of nature the scent of Arsenic-cyanide drenched in the venom of a cobra's fangs combined with drano-ajax, carbon monoxide, and 1001 things sure to end this terryifying game.
    Suddenly when things couldn't possibly get any worse, a lightning bolt strikes directly through Timmy's heart
    Everything he was afraid of
    Everything he knew from the start
    is affirmed
    it is all true
    it is all real
    and you know what?
    for that one second
    that one eternal moment
    Timmy realizes something






    It's all fucking OK




    Submitted on 2006-02-03 19:51:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this made me think of Fear Factor and all. Wow, what a wonderful way to teel all not to be controlled by your fears, because you are stonger than you think. Poor Timmy found out to late, but at least we know. lol. Great writing and flow.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      hehe, awesome. good [censored]. i loved it. it took me on a little journey - now i'm back. it felt good. an adventure in my mind sort of thing. great write man. awesome awesome awesoem.
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]



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