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    dots Submission Name: Jennacidedots
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    Author: Seedofbayne
    ASL Info:    19/M/MA
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 55/82/27
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
    Total Views: 235
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsJennacidedots
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    introducing miss Rolanda Starre

    shes a black widow
    silent on your back
    she will stab you in the front
    for that she has a knack

    She's the queen bee
    that you bow down before
    She needs no introduction
    Your already on the floor

    she's a beautiful flower
    that has a murder streak
    luscious and sweet
    till you're kissing her feet

    She's a Hot Topic hottie
    She's got the perfect body
    it's plain to see that
    She was made for ME

    dedicated<3





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      i didn't really like the beggining becauseit was kind of confusing, but by the end is was so good. I like the part that says "she's a beautiful flower
    that has a murder streak
    luscious and sweet
    till you're kissing her feet"
    I like the wording in it and how you call her luscious and sweet like a flower. And when you call her a "Hot Topic Hottie" that's like adding your own personal flavor very unique. Keep up the good job.

    ~Nique~
    | Posted on 2006-03-25 00:00:00 | by nique | [ Reply to This ]
      This had a rocky start, but flowe really good to the end. I like the ebonics and the almost rap feel to this. The second stanza is my favorite. Nice work.


    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      ... I dont know what to say about this one quite exactly... Just keep writting i love to see your soul in words ...
    xoox me
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Thirst4Serenity | [ Reply to This ]



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