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Submission Name: Kill that Bitch dots

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Author:	screams
Elite Ratio:	5.96 - 433/386/92
Words:	255

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	278
Average Vote:	3.0000
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dedicated to all you bitches...

get it all out.... and let the revolution begin

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Please stroke me
and wet me
my ego needs petting
cut me out with kindness
the perfect woman
a paper cutout girl
shaped so careful
with your masterbation habits
carelessly torn
when my mind comes to words

but forget the feminist pretense
This isnt about gender
he rose above me, gently
when I made him a monster
and I scribbled out his eyes
and made him want me
with no tricks in my bag
just the basics mother taught me
She said use your thighs
to cut him, daughter
shape him how you want him
And now I can waste my life
on soap opera throttle
so love is purely chemical
and attainable
sold in perfume bottles

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pussy juice or tears
these acids can soften skyscrapers
so surrender the world to feline flowers
I swear one day, I'll use these powers

Once I kill the bitch that stole my boyfriend.

right now my hands are tied
and not from the patriarchical aparthied
no.
they are laced around HER neck
we girls
we march
all the time
with spiked heals
on eachother's backs

noose hangs via halter tops
thighs like those can make chaste eyes quake
and I kept him clean in my little black box
but the dampness made him ill

knives, forks, and microwaves
table's set, suburban slaves
and I swear one day I'll break these chains

OnceIkillthatbitch...
OnceIkillthatBitch...

Submitted on 2006-02-04 18:36:21 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yikes. sounds like someone did you wrong. kill the [censored]!
| Posted on 2007-01-02 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]
  what the [censored]. that was so [censored]in crazy.
but yet so good. You have a real talent, i don't know how to explain it. I do have one suggestion though. I didn't understand the first part until after i got to the middle part of it. It seems really unorganized at first, untill i got to te part under the line, then everything seemed just to connect together.
Besides that, that was a really good and really entertaining poem. So much energy and anger in it. It was good.

~*~katara~*~
| Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
  [censored]in a right baby! simply beautiful! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! and so damn true. guys get the bad rap for holding women back when in reality it is you girls acting like little girls, stabbing each other in the back repeatedly, and for what? a guy? are you kidding me?

stunning visual phrasing as usual...this is the kind of thing you were born to write. and I get the feeling your mother taught you well...and you use what she taught you and convert it to words and use those words the way she taught you to use your body and we are all lined up with our tongues hanging out of our mouths.

masterbation should be masturbation but who's complaining? you said "pussy juice" for christsake! most enjoyable girlfriend!
| Posted on 2006-03-20 00:00:00 | by deadndreaming | [ Reply to This ]
  Haaaaaaa! Hooooooo!

You reposted one of my favorites ever! This is not the same poem at all though. The other one was mostly about 'killing that bit.ch!"

When this one ends, it leaves more of an impression that 'he' is the bi.tch you're talking about taking out. This one is different and more elaborate...and even better than the previous post of the same title.

"thighs like those can make chaste eyes quake"

Killer-as.s line there! And by the way, you can't just run around talking about 'pussy juice' in front of me! I'm sensitive and shi.t.

Okay, actually, just between you and me...i think i'm in heat.

Oh nevermind.
(just leave me alone)
twackily wacky twack
| Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by twacky | [ Reply to This ]
  Screamsy scream,

Meeeoorrrow, cat fight.

Damn, you know you could be the rising feminist poet of the new revolution!

I've always thought that the real problem with feminism is that women really are too [censored]y with each other. If more than four of them could live in the same house without destroying each other i'm sure they'd rule the world. Now before i'm accused of being an oppressive male stereotype and cop a stilletto in the eye socket, let's just ponder those last two stanzas...

Yes, quite brilliant, juxtaposing the housewife emancipation with scratch-her-eyes-out rationale bravado. Beautiful irony - you can definately get a hoot out of that one.

Strange though isn't, women forgive men easily but find it hard to forgive each other. Eh, maybe that's bull[censored]. But they always fight over the arsehole's too.

I liked the loose rhyme of the first two stanzas and the play over power and vulnerability too, but that whole section needs tightening somehow. the ideas are a bit scattered around and need to be built up in more of a succession to arrive a the puches in the second part.

Abzy
| Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by Abzy | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, what an entertaining read, wouldnt have been as entertaining if it was written by a guy. this has some shades of palahniuk but isnt tainted by the presence of a debilitating phallus.

i wont even nitpick on some of the spellings, as mentioned above, was a very entertaining and powerful read. it would do it an injustice to call this feminine empowerment, as it is just plain power. almost androgenous. slightly leaning over to one side.

and i hope you succeed in your endeavors to kill that [censored].

peace.
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Pietro | [ Reply to This ]
  You're always hilarious in your venting outrage... your shit always makes me laugh... and don't take that personally, it's just... entertaining to read, you know?

I get what this is about but I'm not quite sure at the same time. It seems like aggro girl-power frustration laced with literal outrage over this biatch stealing your boyfriend from you.

I see you putting yourself into that stereotype persona of women who are the predators - does that make sense? That inherent power of pussy that women have over men HAHAHAHA.

Oh fuck me, I'm off now before I get too carried away.

Seeya Sergeant Screaminator.
Peace and wet dildo's with flowers around them,

Jase
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]

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