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    dots Submission Name: Empty Shelldots
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    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 414
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 739



    Description:
        Hey,

    A couple of days ago I started to search for my old poetry book, so I can make a newer updated one. Here is some poems from the old one. I wrote this poem when I first started poetry, I'm not sure what I was feeling at the time.

    *Let it Flow*
    Raven

    P.s. One thing I can tell you is though around the time of many of these poems, I was feeling lonely, sad, depressed, forgotton etc.


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    dotsEmpty Shelldots
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    Nothing but an empty shell
    Waiting to feel something
    Something that will never be there
    Never to be full
    An empty shell
    A tiny speck of something appears
    Feelings of hatred, sorrow, and endless pain
    Blocked off like a caged animal
    Waiting to be opened
    To be set free
    Emotions rising
    Waiting for that one moment
    That one peacefull moment
    To break free
    To feel once more would be privileged
    A privileged wanted but unwanted
    Maybe one day one person will fill the shell
    One person will unlocked the cage

    Untill one precise moment
    Alll will stay still
    Locked up
    Nothing but an empty shell




    Submitted on 2006-02-05 00:25:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have been feeling this way myself lately and so this touches my soul. I almost shed a tear for you but then I thought its just a poem...
    Grate write!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-12-08 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]



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