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    dots Submission Name: GET UP AND MOVEdots
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    Author: The Conqueror
    ASL Info:    21/female/Missouri
    Elite Ratio:    3.48 - 178/204/42
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGET UP AND MOVEdots
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    GET UP AND MOVE
    don't sit around
    what was ever accomplished
    what was ever found

    By doing NOTHING
    I can't stand it
    we talk of action,
    but only SIT!

    Always speaking of moving
    but never and inch
    I find this crap
    a GOD-AWFUL STENCH!

    Why the hell do we say things
    that we never DO?
    GET UP AND MOVE
    YES, I mean YOU

    Quit smacking your jaw
    about doing so much
    quit saying you'll help things
    you wouldn't even touch

    Quit sitting around
    and swatting at flies
    and SAYING you'll do things
    Your NOT paralyzed!

    GET UP and MOVE
    Have you no feet
    or have you been permanently
    glued to your seat?

    I'm Sick of our chatter
    about changing this earth
    it seems we've only been TALKING
    since the day of our birth!

    GET UP AND MOVE!!!!




    Submitted on 2006-02-05 17:28:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this poem moves in force, plain and simple. short, blunt burst=wonderful. and the theme we all can understand perfectly. almost see u on a stage reading this in a slam. powerful.
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      I read your journal & this & agree - we all sometimes procrastinate or wait for someone else or think we can't do anything to help...I thought this was catchy and encouraging and truthful.
    Like Frank says, Talk the Talk & Do the Walk - thought, expression - ACTION!
    Thanks for the reminder
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Jel,
    Great poem! This is really great subject matter, it's a poem that I can really relate to. I really like the second to last stanza, the one about being glued to your seat. Great stuff, keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-02-07 00:00:00 | by bgmullet | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with this piece, I am no exception.. We need to get up and move and stop dreaming of making things better and do something productive. Great
    motivational piece.
    Love and Peace,
    lynn
    | Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      A young lady of action...that is what you are. Very often we are good at talking the talk, but not so good at walking the walk.

    You pulled no punches here and good on you. I have told you before and I will say it again, you have real talent.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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