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Submission Name: TIME dots

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Author:	Ratboy
ASL Info:	17/Male/South Slocan B.C.
Elite Ratio:	5.17 - 50/73/22
Words:	8

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	1014
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	52

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TIME

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Big bang
Ride the bullet
Then greet it

Submitted on 2006-02-05 18:55:40 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i like the illustration used.. a bullethole smashed thru the window of space. i know this doesn't have much to do with your poem/haiku.. just curious: do u happen to listen to "massive attack"? theres this song im listening to.. its trippy but it kinda goes with it. peace out.
| Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by vohomegirl | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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