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    dots Submission Name: TIMEdots
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    Author: Ratboy
    ASL Info:    17/Male/South Slocan B.C.
    Elite Ratio:    5.17 - 50/73/22
    Words: 8
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTIMEdots
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    Big bang
    Ride the bullet
    Then greet it




    Submitted on 2006-02-05 18:55:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like the illustration used.. a bullethole smashed thru the window of space. i know this doesn't have much to do with your poem/haiku.. just curious: do u happen to listen to "massive attack"? theres this song im listening to.. its trippy but it kinda goes with it. peace out.
    | Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by vohomegirl | [ Reply to This ]


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