Description: this is what i think every girl want to hear..maybe exactly but ....the message of it all...to bad this will not likely become a reality for many...its nice to think about anyways
what every girl wants to hear -------------------------------------------
Girl: I need you to promise me something…
Promise me that we’ll grow old together…
And we’ll die at the same time…
Holding my head to your heart….just like this….
Forever..
Promise me .
Boy: I promise you that we’ll grow old…
And wrinkled like prunes …
And in the last minute before our time is up…
I’ll move your soft white hair away from your face…
And whisper in your ear….
Whisper that no one could love you as much as me …
I’ll kiss your perfect lips …
Hold your face in my hands …
And look into your eyes…
So that you’d be the last thing I’d see before I die…
Die just as we are…right now…just like this…
Forever …
I promise …
I really like it.It almost seems like the perfect happy endings you see in old movies. But really, like this will happen in todays society. Its a real change from your other pieces but life can throw some twists and turns in and you have to deal with the emotion and need to write of something else.Everyones gone through that.I really like how you make the guy repeat what she said, but states it like it will happen.Write on!
WOW! Although this didn't have a flow, or rythme of any sort, this was really good. I loved how you made people thisnk that there is some hope for all of us to hear this. Thank you for that. Great write, and I might add this one to my favorites. Alyssa
Submission Name: what every girl wants to hear
