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    dots Submission Name: blood red revolverdots
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    Author: stateXofXmind
    ASL Info:    18/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 29/49/21
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 251
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 538



    Description:
       yeah after reading it again i finally realized what the hell this one meant...its sopose to be that a girl finds out that her boyfriend that she honestly loved...her one and only love has cheated on her...and he tries to be all like " im sorry baby" but shes tired of his lies..so yeah


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    dotsblood red revolverdots
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    lieing in my bed so cold,
    wishing you would melt away
    silver revolver in my hand
    you drop to your knees and pray
    pray for my forgiveness
    of all the hurtful things
    your praying will now work
    I sit up on my knees
    revolver in my hand
    I call your name,
    point and shoot
    my body numb,
    my eyes black stare
    a smile on my face
    theirs your forgiveness
    and heres mine
    revolver in hand
    point and shoot,
    revolver falls red




    Submitted on 2006-02-06 08:28:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i agree with my little friend akili there, and it reminds me of something i wrote once. i can't find it though. mine's with a knife.
    | Posted on 2006-02-06 00:00:00 | by ParLon | [ Reply to This ]
      Really creepy, though I would like to know what happened before. Right now it seems like some wacko just randomly killing a person and then themself.
    | Posted on 2006-02-06 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]



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