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    dots Submission Name: Stand Up!dots
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    Author: hammyj
    ASL Info:    21/m/Notts UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 130/81/21
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Not sure what this is or where it came from but its just the heavily misunderstood abuse recieved from blokes by women and most of them are afraid to say anything because they see it as degrading.
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    dotsStand Up!dots
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    What kinda man is it?
    That canít stand up for himself.
    Saying yes just to please
    Agreeing just to be at ease.

    It started with a kiss
    A drunken little fling.
    Now its snowballed outta control
    Into a possessive thing.

    You canít go out
    For she will know
    And then her top
    You know will blow.

    Just do as your told
    But this Ďaint right
    You live your world
    With fear and fright

    It should be her
    And not the man
    Whoís too afraid
    To take a stand

    Any friends
    you may have had
    Would laugh at you
    And call you sad.

    What can you do
    Just sit on the shelf
    What kinda man
    Canít stand up for himself?




    Submitted on 2006-02-06 09:02:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the point your make that you should not change who you are for anyone. Evern thow it might be hard to do cos the other person could have a strong personalety and have a hold of you in some way. Alway be your self.
    | Posted on 2007-05-22 00:00:00 | by Cokesu | [ Reply to This ]
      not a bad subject actually,though I very could understand why either a man or woman would put up with abuse,guess maybe love does strange things to both sexes,anyway this is different and its nice to see guys writting about such things also,keep up the works will be looking forward to reading more of your stuff in the near future
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-03-18 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]
      hi i have to agree with you on this one, my mum is soo possesive over my dad, i feel sorry for him, he now lives down near london but comes back every now and then, but parents are still together, it gives him a breather though lol nice right and flow,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-05-03 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      hhhmmmm,a very male view on the subject, but it does aptly express your views, so it cant be faulted!
    love ur use of imagery and the whole conversation style of this piece!
    :D
    | Posted on 2006-02-06 00:00:00 | by bambi144 | [ Reply to This ]


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