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    dots Submission Name: come with it w/ poeticprincessdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 378
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 557
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2111



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    both girls
    I'll be your girl
    but can you come with it
    I can be the girl you need
    but can you come with it
    If you want we can talk a bit
    and i might not give you all
    but i'll give you some of it

    poetic princess
    So you wanna be with me
    we can talk alright
    just know i'm the type that stay around
    not one for the night
    and you seem really cool
    and you can spit some game
    i need a guy who can put it on my hard
    and can make me scream his name

    (Amby)
    I need a guy who like it all
    but can work with some of it
    will spit real game
    and don't fake his shit
    i need a man don't need a kid
    so tell me baby can you come wit it

    (shanxxx)
    I come with what you want, baby girl just ask
    you got me cold sweating at night, just thinkin bout that ass
    I say I'll pass, when other girls wanna give it to me
    I'm not bout to ruin, what others would put through to me
    remember that night, when we was standing out in the rain
    I said I'll love you now and forever, its not said in vain
    If you want me too, I'll make love to you
    but If not, then we can talk, because I love you, its true
    tell me everything about your family and friends
    tell me all your dreams and bout how your heart when it bends
    you can come to my shows, and watch me do the do it flows
    and when I come off stage it just be nothin but hoes
    you standin the back, tryin to get through
    but the first person looked at or talked to is you
    when we go home, baby this is your night
    I role with you to the bed room, you changing outta them tight
    pants, the ones that show the roundness of your ass
    and we have sex all night, you want it you want it slow or some fast
    love with you is like, damn, cant even find the words
    looking at you in that string, admiring your curves
    I love you girl...




    Submitted on 2006-02-06 17:53:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was pretty cool. i think u shoulda put some thing in ur description to say that it was a callobo. who is amby? anyways i liked this whole thing. this was pretty good. was poeticprincess's part a short rap or song lyrics?
    one collabo down. so many more to go...
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow...what ever this was, it was really confusing...lol, I didn't really understand it...maybe a few things women have said to you? Idk...keep writing.

    -Nichole
    | Posted on 2006-02-06 00:00:00 | by fallenpopcorn10 | [ Reply to This ]


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