"Be without burden I whisper softly and repeatedly my words a part of the cosmos and travelling at the speed of Light"
well great words epihany .. thanks for the writing you really have good stuff here iandi really enjoy reading your writings.. they are very inspiring well thanks for sharing and i hope you can come by and check out my writing please i miss your comments.. lol peace and love take care and have a nice day Victor p.d: keep writing
thanks for this one and I just read your journal too, and I believe this to be true. Finding a greater perspective gives us the chance to soar above. My eagle eye is now awakened, I must go enjoy a view of the mountains I thought I might have to climb,
so simple and beautiful, Tiff.. it makes me think of that saying "the kingdom of God is within you..." such a beautiful image of soaring above the world and holding it in the palm of your hand.. i love the whisper and then to awaken with truth in love... no burden, love should never be that.
as always, Tiff, you've boiled it all down for us into beauty and light.
I did not feel like God was being pushed on me as I read this. I love the gentle manner you use to write this. The very manner God uses with us. It was a poem that made rethink my views on God and how I see him. This was well written. It was like being a part of your dream. I'm glad you shared this with us all. Great job.
This is so nice, and leaves me feeling a whole lot less "alone" in this majestic universe. It's like the soft whispers of God. Thank you for posting this lovely piece.. and for the description as well.
It reminds me of that song "He's got the whole world in his hands"- and he does. It's true what you said. A lot of our pains are self-induced.
And most definitely, leave your magic touch on this. I wouldn't change a thing.
another great piece of writing and glad i stopped by to read Thanx for the comment on rampage 15 it was dedicated to what i saw in group homes 35 years ago i dont worry to much about comments as writing is my past time some will like it some dont, even some of the people i work with think i'm wierd as i write poetry oh well to each their own keep posting so i can read thanx again sandman
Tiffany I loved this write In my belief as we are all Gods children I believe we all control are destiny on this Earth We are in charge of our lives and we can change anything we want simply by concentrating and letting in a little of IT You know i am finally fully understanding your meaning of IT and I have to tell ya You are so right what a great and positive way of living your life I applaud you You my friend are going places I hope you realize how many people you have touched with that positivity God Bless Your Friend Ron
Pretty...I do not like the way the stanzas are arranged. It's just too broken. Also, you should really leave out the "&" and "@" symbols, it dumbs down the piece and makes it less profound. Keep working at it, I really appreciate strongly influenced religious pieces.
i like the list of people it just had such a ring to it i loved it ...whats with the <@> u have that in ur other one to...hmm oh well i think for this one u should maybe lose em it kinda takes away from it...