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    dots Submission Name: A Sonnet for Herdots
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    Author: Atropos
    ASL Info:    15/Male/Marietta
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 35/56/20
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 246
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 674



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       Another project for school, to write a sonnet.


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    dotsA Sonnet for Herdots
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    Her eyes are like the hue of ocean waves,
    They roll and break against my yearning heart.
    A color so distinct and yet so vague,
    One must consider you a work of art.
    Her hair like golden silk, is filled with light,
    Cascading gold adorns her lovely face.
    The sun itself is blinded by the sight,
    To see this beauty gathered in one place.
    Her skin like ivory is smooth and pure,
    Her laughter like an angel’s ringing bells,
    Her smile is subtle, honest, and demure,
    I stare into her eyes and my heart swells.
    But these are not her finest traits to me,
    For I love who she is, not what I see.




    Submitted on 2006-02-06 20:04:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow that's so beautiful, all your writing is wonderful, you are very talented. I love the ending-
    But these are not her finest traits to me,
    For I love who she is, not what I see.
    So so sweet, amazing description and imagery. The sonnet flows very well, it goes all goes together brilliantly. I normally try to add some constructive criticism but I can't fault this, it's amazing.
    | Posted on 2006-06-10 00:00:00 | by Sagirlie | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, this was really pretty and sweet. made me wish i was her. by the way, i saved 'A Label' to my favorites. i really like it in case you can't tell.
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Johnny 5 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write! Sometimes I like to go to sea world and take off my pants. It's a bunch of fun! You should try it sometime! Cake, blossoms, and fruity cheese!
    | Posted on 2006-02-06 00:00:00 | by metalman_21 | [ Reply to This ]



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