Description: Well, basically my school's bathrooms are kinda gross, but some of the graffiti is really neat. And I just think it's an interesting way to express yourself, completely public yet completely anonymous at the same time.
The stuff in parentheses are actual things people have written.
...Tell me what you think, and what needs to be improved.
This is really well done...i love the idea and the way that you have presented it...i agree some of the graffiti we see is most definitely art and some of the words written very profound...this flows and presents your idea just perfectly...stormy
Merry Meet Ruby. I like the peom very much. I must agree with freese, I would have liked to see more of the writings. Excellent job on taking the mundane and finding beauty. I think we as poets do this best. Keep the insights coming. Blessed Be Andie
i like it. i think it was creative...not many people can find purity,intelligence and simplicity in bathroom graffiti...i wish there had been more of the actual bathroom writing. i think that would have made it even better...though it must be hard to find good bathroom writings. i do like it a lot though. just a different outlook on something. nice change of pace. it seems so calm, i like that. not trying to shove anything in someones face yet not too passive or anything. anyway nice job.
I love that. I think it's clever how you put the stuff people wrote in parenthesis. The wording is awesome too. Most people see graffiti on stuff every day and never think that there might be something interesting about some of it. It's cool that you took the time to notice. ...And see what it inspired? Great job