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I Love To Pity Myself

Author: swayingbox
ASL Info:    17/m/tx
Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 20 /25 /21
Words: 79
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I Love To Pity Myself

everything i have attempted to prevail in,
I have failed.
I have nothing to feel for
nothing to say i have worked for.
my life is a mistake.
still i try to sleep at night just to not want to wake up.
I need somebody to take my life.
i have no will left to do it myself.
I need someone,
something to care for because i couldn't care any less about myself or the way i live.

Submitted on 2006-02-07 02:08:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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