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    dots Submission Name: I Love To Pity Myselfdots
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    Author: swayingbox
    ASL Info:    17/m/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 20/25/21
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI Love To Pity Myselfdots
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    HATRED!!
    everything i have attempted to prevail in,
    I have failed.
    I have nothing to feel for
    nothing to say i have worked for.
    my life is a mistake.
    still i try to sleep at night just to not want to wake up.
    I need somebody to take my life.
    i have no will left to do it myself.
    I need someone,
    something to care for because i couldn't care any less about myself or the way i live.




    Submitted on 2006-02-07 02:08:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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