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Author:	swayingbox
ASL Info:	17/m/tx
Elite Ratio:	2.48 - 20/25/21
Words:	79

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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I Love To Pity Myself dots

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HATRED!!
everything i have attempted to prevail in,
I have failed.
I have nothing to feel for
nothing to say i have worked for.
my life is a mistake.
still i try to sleep at night just to not want to wake up.
I need somebody to take my life.
i have no will left to do it myself.
I need someone,
something to care for because i couldn't care any less about myself or the way i live.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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