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    dots Submission Name: Luke's Rant Idots
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    Author: irvine_valentin
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 43/74/15
    Words: 291
    Class/Type: Prose/Venting
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       Not much to say for this really it's pretty obvious, I'm just getting some stuff off my chest so it's not in any paticular order, so if you comment just keep in mind I'm just venting!


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    dotsLuke's Rant Idots
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    So my parents get back from my grandparents last night and what's the first thing my step dad says to me, is it how you feeling? No that would be good considering I've been ill for the weekend, was it even how was work? No it was "Isn't that the cat's blanket (The WARMEST blanket in the house that was keeping me warm) So there's gonna be cat hair around the house?" thats nice isn't it, literally the first thing he said to me, even before "Hi!" Then my mum decided to throw a paddy that I didn't want to go to bed at 1030! So she threw me off the internet so I didn't get around to talking to this fantastic girl on the internet, that pissed me off quite a bit. So then to make a stand and prove my point I stayed up until 1230 watching friends...OK it seems kind of petty but at the time it seemed like a good idea. I couldn't believe that was the first thing he said to me. Me and my nan had a fantastic weekend without them and my three year old sister and as soon as they get back I wish hey weren't, my mum threated to send me back to school last night (I go to a boarding school) and I just thought I'd prefer to be there than here with them here. Then I spent the rest of the night wishing I'd said it to her. Consequently I (like probably 90%of teenagers in the world) am pissed off by my parents. More than anything I'm gutted I couldn't talk to this stand up girl because they're power crazed bastards.
    BASTARDS!




    Submitted on 2006-02-07 05:34:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww, wish that girl was me, lol, lucky. Anyways, yeah, this is a great rant. My dad does that dumbass [censored] to me all the time, I hate it.
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my poor honey.

    Yeah, parents suck. But I'm sure you'll get to talk to your girl more than you think, and if she's a true friend, she'll be around even if you do get booted for a while. ;)

    Talk to ya later.


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    -xo-
    | Posted on 2006-02-07 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, I am very sorry to hear this story my friend... It seems like the life one of my very close friends, Like you her parents are also power hungry [censored]s... I think that it bites a lot... anyway, Good Luck with life. THNX

    - Nammy
    | Posted on 2006-02-07 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ]
      My friend I understand this write and trust me I do understand your pain
    My Friend that cat you have in the picture and speak of
    My best friend in my Life is my cat Dennis the Menace and I have a funny feeling your cat is one of your best friends
    Isnt it funny how animals truelly understand our pain and our always there for us when we need someone to understand and Love
    My Friend you are a lot smarter then your parents and friends think you are
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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