Deadly illness
effects a young girl
ignored and depressed
she's dead to the world
she breaks in silence
she's going insane
lost in her world
they put her in pain
she's lost and depressed
wishing she were dead
she's going crazy
and loosing her head
loosing her will to live
ready for it all to end
she's left alone
she has no friends
no one to talk to
no ones ever there
no one is around
no one cares
this illness inside
effects her brain
causing her to put
herself in shame
the illness will come to those who dont believe
it will tear it will shred
it will leave you deceased
dont turn yer back on her
learn what is true
if you dont.....
the illness will come for you
love the ending reminds of sumthin i can't put my finger on...anyway i thought it was great don't really see reason to change it i like it alot. speacily she's going insane lost in her world they put her in pain she's lost and depressed wishing she were dead she's going crazy and loosing her head loosing her will to live ready for it all to end I really liked this part i can relate to that... great write -Jess-
Submission Name: Illness
