A couple of days ago I started to search for my old poetry book, so I can make a newer updated one. Here is some poems from the old one. I wrote this poem when I first started poetry, I'm not sure what I was feeling at the time.
*Let it Flow*
Raven
P.s. One thing I can tell you is though around the time of many of these poems, I was feeling lonely, sad, depressed, forgotton etc.
No one would ... & Confusion -------------------------------------------
No one Would ...
If the tides were to turn as swift as they came
No one would notice
If the eyes were to become empty
No one would care
If the sol was to to become dark
No one would see
If the water weas to become blood red
They would turn thier cheek
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Confusion
All around us
Every step you take
Leads to it
No were to run
No were to hide
It's amoung us
We breathe it
We live it
We feel it
No matter what we do
We will always belive it
It's part of us
It will never leave
i thought both were pretty cool, i liked the first one better. keep up the good work. the only thing that I would suggest to you, is that maybe you could fix the spelling or something like that.
Submission Name: No one would ... & Confusion
