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    dots Submission Name: thE MEANiNGdots

    Author: Hiruetske
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 10/16/8
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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       dO YOU WANt tO kNOW? YOU REAllY WANt tO kNOW WhAt'S GONNA hAPPEN? bE MY GUESt. thiS iS ONlY thE fiRSt PiECE Of thE tRUth, jUSt AS thERE ARE PiECES iN PUZZlES. i'M NOt ASSUMiNG YOU'll UNdERStANd All Of it, OR bEliVE ANY Of it, All i WANt iS fOR SOMEONE tO liStEN.

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    thE MEANiNG iS WhAt thEY WANt YOU tO kNOW. All Of thEM WANt "thE PEOPlE" tO kNOW WhAt'S EithER thE SkiM Of thE tRUth, OR A COMPlEtE liE. WhY? bECAUSE if "thE PEOPlE" kNEW thE tRUth, if "thE PEOPlE" bEliVEd WhAt iS GOiNG tO hAPPEN, iS GOiNG tO hAPPEN... icon_stare.gif ...thERE WOUld bE NO "thE PEOPlE". MAttER Of fACt, thERE WOUld bE NO "thEM" EithER. thE thiNG iS, thE WORld iS GOiNG tO ENd SOMEdAY. WhEN? WEll, UNfORtUNAtElY, i dON't REAllY kNOW. SufiCE tO SAY, thERE iS A WAY tO CONtiNUE thiS EXiStANCE. ANd YES, thERE iS A REASON AS WEll.

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      this seems like too much of an obvious statement. pretty much a waste of typing. anyone who doesnt realize this isnt going to be pulled into clarity by reading this because the fact is they wouldnt want to waste their time. no offense. so dont get annoyed and assume im one of "them"..
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      Well I kind of get this. Except for the lettering it just gives me a headache. Keep to caps or lowercase please... Ow my fragile little mind... People it seems need to find there own truth in what they say. It sounds alot like my writing Illusion, which describes the way our society is met with personal entrapment. I cant reread for more input until later, its giving me a headache lol
    -Evil Jesture
    | Posted on 2006-02-07 00:00:00 | by Evil Jesture | [ Reply to This ]

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