Thats so sad. I wrote a poem about my friend when he killed himself. Sometimes it helps to get it out. SO I hope this helps. And don't ever move on until its time for you to.
i really felt something in this one. i really like it also. but my friends are to pussy to kill them selves, so they just [censored] about how they want to die. i feel sorry for them because they do not know how it trully feels. i feel that you do.
wow this is really good..my friend commited suicide to, but he didnt use a knife, he hung himself its tough to through, but you did a good job expressing yourself. really good poem. but im sure your friend doesnt want you to do what she did, hang in there, it'll all be alright
this was excellent..i have gone thru something like that..and i feel everything you wrote...tho the line about emo..it was disapointing...you do not have to be emo to think like that..
man that sucks! you can feel the angst and pain, the blades and broken hearts i can feel it all, like a sea rushes into your lungs all at once and you just drown in your own life, thanks for the comment by the way keep checking back on more of my work thanks much, keep this up
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