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    dots Submission Name: Luke's Rant IIdots
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    Author: irvine_valentin
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 43/74/15
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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       This is yet another rant from the life of me!


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    dotsLuke's Rant IIdots
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    Good God! Do you know what annoys me?
    My parents! Right last night were sitting at the table for fajitas (mmm...fajitas) and for the record if I was going to do this my parents wouldn't let it go. OK right so we're sitting at the table and my Step-dad sat there reading a paper for like 10 mins, then they decided to turn off the radio, just a little background music but no it gets turned of, whilst my step dad is still reading the paper! If I was to turn off the radio or read the paper I'd get in shit! Fucking faggot bastard parents!




    Submitted on 2006-02-08 05:18:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I laughed a little, I must admit, because I read your first two rants back-to-back. I started to think about how I get yelled at for staying in my room all day and not sitting around watching T.V. with my family.

    I didn't comment on the last on, so I will leave a comment here for it too. It is quite [censored]ty that the first thing he said was about the cat blanket. I'm sure most teenagers will sympathize with your rants. Parents may have the last word, BUT THERE WILL ALWAYS BE UTTERANCES! Heh, something my lil bro is famous for. They can be hard to hadle, but in the end, for better or worse, you're stuck with them

    This coming from someone who loves both creatures who had part in the making of her.

    Bonnie
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by Krazy | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, that "comment below me was harsh. Oh well, what the hell do they know? lol. I know it's always the little things that piss me off. So, i'm not going to say that how you reacted was immature. It pushed your button. Good one.
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      All I can think of is "WOW, what an immature and petty rant..."

    I fully expect you to lash out at me for saying so with some equally juvenile response, but cest la vie
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh poor hun. I'm sorry. Parents are horrible hypocrits sometimes.

    Sorry I didn't get to talk to you this morning...afternoon to you..lol.

    Crap, bell rang.

    -xo-
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]


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