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    dots Submission Name: They Say (rhymes)dots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       They are assholes sometimes.


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    dotsThey Say (rhymes)dots
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    they say irrelevant things
    that I am not fond of repeating
    sometimes I laugh at them
    and they get angry *sigh*
    but what can I do really?
    I wasn't being rude
    I simply think that they are silly
    okay then this is a complete waste of time




    Submitted on 2006-02-08 12:26:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HA! HA! This was cute. Kind of like talking to a wall in some way. "They" sometimes say things that seem like ideas brought on through the bitter conversations of a sewing circle sometimes, HA!

    Thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, that was short and sweet and to the point. I guess. Hey, let's see if I can leave a comment that's longer than the poem itself. I like kitty cats. I wish I had one. There was this crazy commercial on the radio last night, and it kept making this kitty noise and I wanted it real bad. I'm probably going to get my tattoo tonight. Did you know that Brokeback Mountain is now playing in Huntsville? Jessie really wants to go see it this weekend. But who knows what kind of mood Porky will be in...Hey, did you know they're getting a new bathtub. And you don't have to go in Jessie's room to turn on the hot water. Isn't that crazy? What a concept... Tonya had her baby. It was a girl. Hope it looks like it's dad, and not it's ugly A S S mama. I haven't spoken to him since Wednesday morning... Aren't cha proud? Well, that's all I got...Read my poems, it's fun...
    | Posted on 2006-02-09 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, this made me smile, at first I was wondering where the Hell this was going, lol, but the ending's the funny part.

    Good job.
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this musing - in a way, sounds like you're talking to your muses

    I, too, am probably way off but that's what I got outta "IT".

    Enjoy life!
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh boy, I totally agree. Some talks so serious about things that really makes no sense at all (or) gets so bent out of shape over the silliest things. I've always believed life is just to short to be so serious all the time. Myself, I love a little laugh once in awhile. Laughter is good medicine for the soul...
    A good point you have here!
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write! It sounds like you are very opinionated but no one likes what you have to say, I may be way off, but that's just my opinion.
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Draigon | [ Reply to This ]
      the 'they' in this is very condo'ra / i too would be unease for the : "I'm only going to tell you this once..." routine ../. very fine indeed...

    janus
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by J W I | [ Reply to This ]
      Too awesome! So many times we find ourselves wasting our time pretending to care about people who could care less about us... hmmm food for thought...
    jenn @>->-
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by BreakAndFall | [ Reply to This ]


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