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    dots Submission Name: Because Of Youdots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 219
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 636



    Description:
       Last night me and my boyfriend Gary broke up.He broke up with me because he said he needs to pull his grades up and maybe if they come up in the 80 days of school we have left we'll get back together.But,I'm not counting on anything happening and not getting my hopes up because 80 days is along time and I don't know what will happen in 80 days.I'm not even sure if that's the real reason,I'm hearing all diffrent reasons...I'm confused.But,yeah...I wrote this.Lemme know what's up...


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    dotsBecause Of Youdots
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    Drowned in pain,
    My heart shatters.
    Fallen so fast,
    And nothing matters.

    A torn out soul,
    And a shot to the head.
    A slit on my wrist,
    And I lay down dead.

    My torn out heart,
    My ripped up chest,
    Causes so much pain.
    All I can say is I tried my best.

    Drowning in my own pool of blood,
    I lay here thinking.
    But think no more for I cannot,
    As I realize I begin sinking...

    Down in the mud...
    Into the moore.
    Soaked with blood,
    And forever torn.







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