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Im so close to home
yet Im so lonely
Why am I lost in a world of dreams
of fantasies and the make believe
When in truth I'm really dieing
in the real world I'm not just crying
So save my Soul
and save my Life
because today is on my mind
and I'll try not to hide how I feel
The gun in my hand pointed at my head
I close my eyes and pretend I'm dead
I walk up to Heaven and the angels said
"theres no place for you here. try downstaris instead"
I turn around in a flash of flame and
asked the devil if I culd stay
He said quietly and simply "Your free to visit anytime you like as long as you don't stay the night."
That was good enogh for me so I open my eyes put down the gun and take off the disguise
But now I'm lonely, just as lonely as before and if I think about it probably even more
So I turn my room upside down looking for the only thing that can not be found
dusty and dirty and under my bed
I find what I'm looking for even after what you said
I go down stairs and clean my knife,
my only friend who hasn't deserted me in my quest for life
Submitted on 2006-02-08 18:16:43
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I like this. When I first started to read it, I thought it wasn't going to be original, and it was going to be the usual "I'm so depressed" poem, but my thought quickly changed for the better.
Great work, I hope to read more from you soon. Keep it up.
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