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    dots Submission Name: Luke's Rant IIIdots
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    Author: irvine_valentin
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 43/74/15
    Words: 289
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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    dotsLuke's Rant IIIdots
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    OK let me start this by saying that Rant I & II were kind of the same post continued and they were just out lets...I honestly tried to put it poetically but I couldn't so I just ranted. Right this stuck up prissy bitch decided to lecture me. Now let me get this through to you I DON'T CARE ABOUT YOUR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes I do have an interest in writing and maybe you'd see that if you looked further but sometimes people get pissed and like to rant...My friends are on this site and some people would like to know how I was so I posted and if you open your eyes people commented talking as FRIENDS (it is in the dictionary) so I tried to take the high road saying ya know what ever I dont care if you slated me but hey! Could she leave it there...could she Hell! No she had to post a fucking disotation on my commenting thing...I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU WERE DOING WHEN YOU WERE 18, PEOPLE ARE DIFFERENT AND I PLAN NOT TO WASTE MY LIFE!
    Now I realise this isn't a rant as such (and it's also not a poem) It's me just venting...if you have a problem with this don't piss me off by leaving feed back just press that pretty red X in the top right of the screen, that closes the nasty scary window. Because if you complain I won't take the highroad any more...this feels much better. Remember I don't care about your life if you don't care about mine FINE don't comment. I may be petty in writing this but you're ugly and tomorrow I'll be over this!




    Submitted on 2006-02-08 18:44:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, now I want to read your other rants and what was said to piss you off.

    I have posted a vent as well. They are a form of writing and surprisingly enough you get people who can relate to them. I did, why can't you

    Heh, did it feel good to get this off your chest?
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by Krazy | [ Reply to This ]
      Temper temper.

    I thought I bored you.

    Obviously I, instead, got under your skin.

    Well, as that was not my intention, I apologize. I guess I was pissed and ranted a bit...isn't that what people do? Or are ugly people not allowed? lol

    by the way, I like your cat

    ~B~
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      hey man you've got a lot of anger... and im sorry you feel that way. and i know it might not help to say i care about you cause i dont really know you and you dont know me but like you ever need to get somthing off you or need some one to talk to im always there for ya buddy, i mean i know its a dog eat dog world out their and most people never accept me at first eather... so all im saying is im sorry your pissed and if you ever wanna blow some steem off send me an IM saying your Luck from the rant post
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Breed of Wind | [ Reply to This ]
      [censored] YEAH! You're so kickass! Why aren't their people like you and other people I've met on here in my town? Damn this sucks, lmao. This is your best rant.
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]


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