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    dots Submission Name: thE PURPOSEdots
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    Author: Hiruetske
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 10/16/8
    Words: 358
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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       thiS iSN't EVEN thE hAlf Of it. PEOPlE, it'S SO COMPliCAtEd, EVEN i dON't fUllY UNdERStANd it. i'M jUSt ElAiNiNG it AS bESt AS i CAN. Oh ANd bY thE WAY, it'S NOt A "POEtRY illUSiON. i'M SERiOUS. EVERYthiNG i SAY hERE, i MEAN.


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    EVENtUAllY thE POWERS Of MAN Will CRUMblE UNdERNEAth thE WEiGht Of hiS OWN CREAtiON, NAMElY thE Ai. YOU'VE All SEEN thE MAtRiX, RiGht? WEll, hAtE tO bREAk it tO YOU, bUt it'S NOt GONNA bE ANYthiNG likE thAt. it'S NOt GONNA bE SUPER COOL SlOW MOtiON fiGhtS ANd MEN dOdGiNG bUllEtS. ACtUAllY, if YOU'VE SEEN thE ANiMAtRiX, thEN YOU kNOW WhAt hAPPENS bEfORE thE MAtRiX iS CREAtEd. MOViES, GAMES, thEY'VE All bEEN SiMPlY SYStEMS Of CONtROl. CONtROl OVER thE MiNdS Of thE SkEPtiCitY Of thE hUMAN MiNd. fOCUSiNG ON thiS PARt Of thE bRAiN, thEY hAVE PREPAREd US fOR thE iNNEVitAblE. WE ARE All GOiNG tO diE. WE WON't SEE it COMiNG bECAUSE thE CREAtiVitY Of thE hUMAN MiNd hAS dRAMAtiZEd thESE tO-bE tRUthS With ElOSiONS ANd OthER ViSUAllY PlEASiNG iMAGES, MENtAllY StiMUlAtiNG idEAlS, AS WEll AS thE CONCEPt thAt ENtERS EVERYONE'S hEAd At SOME POiNt iN tiME, thE fEEliNG Of COMPlEtE iNViNCibilitY. WhEN thE tiME COMES, MAbYE NOt iN MY lifE, bUt if it dOES, ONlY fEW Will bE REAdY tO StANd AGAiNSt thE RiSiNG GROWth Of tEChNOlOGY. thUS iS MAN bECOMiNG thE ARChitECt Of hiS OWN dEMiSE iNdEEd. YEt, EVEN thE ANiMAtRiX WAS A SCEME CREAtEd bY hANdS. it'S All AbOUt hOW MUCh ONE CAN dO With hOW littlE. thE hANdS thAt SCAlEd thE ENdlESS PROdUCtiON Of lEttERS, ElECtRONiC SYMbOlS,CURSORS, EVEN thE VERY CAMERAS USEd iN "iNNOCENt", EVERYdAY lifE. i GUESS thE PURPOSE Of Ai, it'S dEStiNY, iS tO bEGiN A NEW ERA fOR itSElf. Ai tRUlY Will REPlACE hUMANitY, AS did hUMANitY REPlACE thE EXtiNCtitiES Of PASt CREAtURES, fORGOttEN bY thEiR fAilURE tO EXiSt. diNOSAURS, PAh. SURE, thEY EXiStEd, bUt AS SOON AS thE thOUGht Of bRiNGiNG thEM bACk tURNEd iNtO ANOthER SChEME, WEll, thAt WAS bASiCAllY thE bEGiNiNG Of thE ENd Of MAN. it Will NOt COME AS thE bOOM Of WAR, bUt AS thE ViRUS SO dUMblY ChERiShEd tO thiS dAY. it Will PRObAblY bE A lONG tiME bEfORE MAN'S CREAtiON bECOMES POWERfUl ENOUGh fOR SElf-SUStAiNENCE, EVEN it'S UPRiSiNG, ANd bEGiNiNG Of A NEW WORld Of iNtEllEGENCE. YEt, if "OUtSidE SOURCES" dECidE tO StEP iN, it COUld bE SOONER thAN WE'd thiNk.




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    ||| Comments |||
      silly stoner. Due to the limited perception of man as a singular being, one person can never uncover the role of humanity or the destruction thereof. Thus is the conclusion of God(s) as omnipotent being(s) knowing and seeing beyond perception of humans. Your parnoia is a result of incompetence to perceive and partly because of fictitious media.
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by disillusion | [ Reply to This ]
      see, this is better but now there is a new issue. personally im with you, but the whole things sounds too much like a conspiracy theory that its hard to take seriously.
    | Posted on 2006-02-09 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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