Description: This is a work in progress. I am currently working on a series of poems with first lines from the poetry of Jim Morrison. I am using this as an exercise to overcome my writer's block. Hopefully something worthwhile comes of this.
Sleep and Sex -------------------------------------------
In this full-throated
haze of love
between sleep and desire
Slow churning ecstasy
a lullabye in rapture
lots of passion in few lines...reminds me of a first night with someone...between the passion there is little sleep...we just want to play and pay attention to our significant other...absorb each other...the tiredness is euphoric in a sense...
you are quite good at painting pictures with your words...and also saying a lot with what you don't say.
After the after glow and after you wake up
druged by the night before, Oh lord I hope I'm off the next day. What can I say, You have a way pulling people into a poem.
I see a book in your future.
make it happen.
I suppose it all really depends what time you have to get up for work the next day...
One has to love Jim Morrison and the Doors. They were one of the most original acts back in the day. I can't believe they're actually touring without jim though. He WAS the band...him with his crooning and nice clothes.... ~Aaron