Description: well i wrote this for my grandpa he died last may but nobody but a few family members were with him so my grandma is coming up and i was wondering if this a good poem or not because i would like to read this for his funeral here in michigan.
my tears -------------------------------------------
my tears roll down
my face as i mourn
a loved one.as he
passes through the light
and into the afterlife
but my tears will stop
and i know death is
just the beginning
for a bright new day
we will all remember
him and through our rememberence
he will live on and be with us
grandpa we all love you and miss
you for now i will shed
my tears.
I'm really sorry, for you anguish and loss. I lost my Great Aunt a month ago, I know how you feel. Her and I were close. This is a very beautiful write and it is really hard to find words to describe emotions. I hope you keep writing. I truly am sorry.
I'm sorry first of all for your loss, I actually just lost my grandmother a few days ago...and the poetry helps I'm sure. I think that this was written with emotion and therefor I am not going to comment...real emotions are beautiful and I could never do them justice with words. The best of luck to you.
Submission Name: my tears
