Description: just something for all the young lovers
Wings Of Love -------------------------------------------
Last night I held you in my arms
Tasting and inhaling all your special charms
As a full moon beamed its approving smile
We swayed to breathtaking music all the while
Though I know not from where it came...
This soft and intoxicating melody
Mingling with a scent of jasmine...
That perfumed the very air
As we danced upon heavens stairs
Waltzing across the stars shinning into the night
Every twinkle appeared to be a love light
No boundaries laid before us..oh no!
For heaven itself truly knows
Love flies on magical wings
Making all things possible...
You know I gotta side with Ron on this one because I do love a happy ending, especially in a love poem. I have been finding some really good love poems today and this one is no exception. This is such a sweet poem and so well written I truley enjoyed the read... !doc'
I definately agree. This was really romantic and it will reach out to some of the younger lovers out there. I like your imagery and word usage, really skillful. I loved the rhyme patern, it was interesting and it held my attention, lol, sometime rhyme patterns do that to me. Great write.
Hello! A very sweet and romantic poem. Wow, It made me think of nights with my boyfriend and how sometimes the moments felt just as you described. I loved this and thought is was a poem that reach all ages of lovers for all time. Great job.
I actually liked the setting. Last night I held you in my arms = Very simple and also very deep and intimate. well done Also the dancing on heaven's stairs was very original. i enjoyed it because it is simple yet it conveys a pleasant memory
I really like this write What I like must about this write is you left the ending with the couple happy Very few poems written of Love carry happiness thru the whole write Your were able to easily achieve this That is a sign to how loving your Heart really is God Bless Your Friend Ron