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    dots Submission Name: Soar Throughdots
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    Author: samyalone
    ASL Info:    17/f/my room
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 93/67/18
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Description:
       This is just something...to be partof nature, to see what the eagle sees....


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    dotsSoar Throughdots
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    See with eyes unclouded
    Hear sounds far away,
    Soar with freedom, passion
    Look up to the light of day.

    Taste and feel the wind
    As it rushes to your face,
    Keep looking higher ~
    Feel you heart being to race.

    Follow the lone wolf
    Rushing through the trees,
    Then soar into the sky
    An eagle flying through the breeze




    Submitted on 2006-02-09 21:10:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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