Strong feelings coming from the heart, it is best to write when it comes from an experience you have felt. So much pain and suffering is ouch to the heart and soul... so you cant be expected to say goodbye... you know she is still there with you in your thoughts, your dreams, and your heart you know you can still count on her. Good writing nice rhythim and very emotional stuff.
i agree with the above user...I mean poems are best when theyre written out of actual experiences... and this is an amazing experiecne i lost my mother to and ive changed for better or worse im not sure but i have. and this poem really shows how youre struggling to survive...amazing keep it up!
the best poems are the ones that come from actual feelings , and are best when the piece is written while those feelings are still strong. I havent read any of your other pieces i dont think but i really enjoyed this.good work