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Author: RyukiTZR
ASL Info:    14/F/-
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This is an excerpt from a chat log in MSN Messenger that recorded what and who I had chatted with. Kinda great feeling to help, that is if it helped. I'm not so sure about the spelling for the last word... hehe.

Start Now.

I have an online friend I never really knew across the other computer. We just knew the same website, made friends and then chat. One day I felt happy talking with her...

She:I would like to write my own book, but I'm not really good in spelling and that kind of stuff...


Me:Not really a problem. Just copy words...

Me:Starting from NOW.


Me:Copy this and paste it in a Microsoft Word document.


She:Oh okay I got it.

Me:Cause you're writing a book, you gotta know how to get it started.

She:Hehe this is crazy.

Me:I know...

Me:So...started thinking?




She:Lolz... okie dokie.

She:But what should I name it?


Submitted on 2006-02-10 06:58:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yeah i agree. just listen to the voice inside of you. feel free to take risks with your writing. if it doesn't pay off then you'll know better next time. if it does then lucky you ;) keep writing

| Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah . . . you are thirteen. just keep writing and writing and writing. develop your thoughts. think detail. and don't be afraid to say what you feel.
| Posted on 2006-02-11 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
  This was cute...I loved it...thanks for sharing it with the world. I like the end, prologue fits like a charm. Yup yup yuppers...don't really know what to say other than I liked this.
| Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

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