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    dots Submission Name: Prison Sicknessdots
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    Author: Vagrant_AI
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Arizona, USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 9/13/23
    Words: 301
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 152
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1758



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    dotsPrison Sicknessdots
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    Take the door to the left it’s the second best choice don’t take the window
    I think we’ve been spotted. Damn it, then cut his throat so he won’t let them know
    The blood trickles from the second savior’s body along the floor
    It’s slippery when wet, don’t trip, chances taken out of a losing bet

    I’ve never done anything like this

    Escaping through the front door with a woman never seemed so easy
    The sky has turned black was it for him so scared
    Where are we going? The front door holds the answer
    Cheap scheme woman tell me your reason before you lead me
    Frustration with my questions duct tape my mouth shut as we escape
    Things they’ll do to us

    I think I’m going to faint the blood loss is making me sick inside
    Will you carry me away and ask nothing from my empty, hungry mind
    The scares take the surprise away. As wolves turn into tracking spotlights
    Take me to the outside world and make me learn of it
    Frustration with my questions duct tape my mouth shut as we escape
    Things they’ll do to us if caught

    Spring the traps, set the alarms they know we’re here
    Run fast armored men and follow us to the waiting end

    I think I’m going to faint the blood loss is taking me sick suicide (See setting star Omega IV)
    Will you carry me away and ask nothing from the burning sky (Raise setting star Omega IV)
    The scares take the surprise away (Such subtle demise could’ve been prized)
    As wolves turn into tracking spotlights, take me to the outside world (You’ve escaped the court of Way)
    And make me learn of it (Let them go, raise setting star Omega IV)




    Submitted on 2006-02-10 09:00:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmm. i am not sure what i think about this piece. i think because the events seem a bit unclear to me. i did enjoy the fast-pacedness of it. it seemed to be taken out of a scene of a quentin tarantino film (his early projects)... ;)
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by Sacred Sindy | [ Reply to This ]



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