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    dots Submission Name: Resembling Happydots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 779
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    dotsResembling Happydots
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    and I belong to you
    and I hope that you keep me
    and I don't know why I'm so happy
    that I have to fight to keep from weeping

    and I know the stars shine
    and I hope they don't burn away
    and i see their light in your eyes
    and I see the heat in your face

    and I know I see the moon
    And i just pray no one rushes the day
    because I look for your headlights on the raod
    and while I watch for you they light my way
    and I know I belong to you
    and i hope that you keep me
    and I know I'm not sure what this is
    but it really resembles happy




    Submitted on 2006-02-10 12:35:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awe . . . it made me feel all gooey inside. that's a good thing, hehe. it was cool. i liked it a lot. filled me up with good feelings and stuff. laterz.
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this piece and i truly hope to read more by you. keep up the amazingly aweseome work. i know you can take your work and go somewhere big with it.
    love
    tina
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      aww bubz this is realy sweet,
    when i was reading it it put a smile on my face,
    it nice to read these types of poems.
    keep em comeing
    and
    thanx for sharing
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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