This is really a deep poem that is beautifully written I believe you were talking about the love you and your soulmate share and at times how it looks that destiny is trying to destroy those binds I really liked this Great Job! God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
humm... what i like about your type of poetry is the mystery. It can leave the reader to really interupt it any way they wish. It doesn' actualyl explain exactly what is happening, per se. If that makes sense. It leaves me to put myself in the poem and imagine a time in life when i would have felt the same. To me, that's an excellent write. When it can make the reader feel such emotion as to put inside the poem sort of speak. Anyway.. wow.. wodnerful poem. I liked it. Going to go check out your page and see what else you got. Thanks!