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My End. -------------------------------------------
Death seems so close,
almost so near that I feel the cold breath.
I sense that its time,
and long time sinse I made that choice.
I almost gave up...
I need it to be over now,
no more time....... no more me...
though i read ur poems u seem so depressed..life is hard and there`s a good side and bad side in it ..but there`s many thing worth to live for ..:) i read a poem here and i liked a part from it ..: Life is a beautiful thing to have,Even if it is full of sadness,Even when all hope is lost :) just cheer up
everytime i read ur writes! it reminds me of how i feel! i really never thought anyone felt the same as me! just thought it was me! writing helps! but maybe you should u noe focus on something else otha dan ur pain! i noe thats hard im strugglin wit dat! ~akaila~ good job!
I loved that poem. The way you gave death human characteristics. Awsome. I always liked dark poems. Altogether, i found it to be a good peice, but im not much of a poet >.<
Submission Name: My End.
